5.06.2008

untitled and possibly unfinished

my fingertips, light as kisses
skim dark cocoa skin
valleys and plains, angles and curves
now such familiar topography 
that I can roam them in my dreams
dusky male nipples tempt me
and I am helpless to resist
soothing suckles mixed with claiming bites
deep bass moans reverberate through my soul
and I want more 
of you

6 comments:

Eb the Celeb said...

"soothing suckles mixed with claiming bites"

sounds painful and yet turning me on...lol

good stuff

NaimaEfuru said...

thanks EB

af said...

haha "valleys, plains, topography, angles"

damn that was hott especially the dusky male nipples! i put up my 6th "adult" story on kollege. working on the seventh one right now.

-Q. said...

Sexy...
Valleys and plains. I like that. Really short but very detailed, very sexy poem..
Just peeking through, 1st time -Q.

-Q. said...

Sexy...
Valleys and plains. I like that. Really short but very detailed, very sexy poem..
Just peeking through, 1st time -Q.

All-Mi-T [Thought Crime] Rawdawgbuffalo said...

vivid and classic

my fingertips, light as kisses
skim dark cocoa skin
valleys and plains, angles and curves
now such familiar topography


hope u dont mind the drive by folk

will b back sister